student 1 - ride | oddball braggadocio goofy boy raps | Minneapolis





  • Hey @Coines Cool song. First thing off bat is that melody. I'd try to come up with something a little more infectious. The verse is kind of bland as well, nothing is really capturing my attention here. Your flow is on point though, I would just try to create a more interesting delivery on the track. Your feature doesn't add too much to the song, and the beat doesn't really do much more than repeat it's 4 bar. Great try, however. Would love to keep providing some feedback as you keep putting out more music. Send some heat here: marcus@91mgmt.com


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