Feedback on my song
In philosophy Im a ceticist
Philosophical way of a pessimist
Cant find the truth cuz its not definite
Kinda crazy how we been fooled our whole lifes
That means they told us, all lies
Nice imagination game, you should have pride
Nothing real can be threatned, nothing unreal exists
Modern day illuminist philosophies with a lot of twists
If you live in your own head, you could fall on an abyss
Both successfull and loser dont exist
If we dont resist it cant persist
Life is easy, but it could become a strug
If you fall, you could get dirty with the mud
What I think:
I think my voice is holding me back, thats the worst of my inventory but it could get better with practice.
I might record later again.
Tell me what you think.